In a kingdom of fantasy
Where the inevitable happens
And magic rules the world
There stands the great ones
The ones who rule these lands
Who day in and day out
Bring peace to the people
And sometimes war
Men
Of greatness
A single touch of their hand
Can turn an entire feast
Into gold
Their features
Are carved by angels
And are many times mistaken
As Gods
Yes, what a life it is
To be a shukun
To live out in wealth
To rule your people
On the castle's throne where you sit
And make all proper decisions
And the people bow to you
To your awesome power
Yes, to be a leader
To have this kind of power
To be the lord of all lands
The power of a shukun
Author notes
Shukun = Lord
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward ~The Clan of Shukuns and Shukujos only~ by BabyFox Amberlight.
600 points, ended May 23, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What's in a name? by whispernthedark.
625 points, ended June 6, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is very well written, when I read it, it reminds me of the beginning to a video game. Nicely done, thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
whisper
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congrats on the bronze.. very well written, and a bit spirital.. nice job and good luck
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Excellent
Very well done. Has such a marvelous fantasy quality and full of great visions.
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very well written
Yes, what a life it is
To be a shukun
To live out in wealth
To rule your people
On the castle's throne where you sit
And make all proper decisions
And the people bow to you
To your awesome power
this is my favorite par -
Wow this is really good. I love how it's written. ^_^ Keep it up.
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Um...i knew what Shukun meant
but thanks for putting it there 
that will be very helpful for people who don't know what Shukun meant. Thank you for entering the contest *bows politely*
~Shukujo Kitsune Akuma~
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