Reborn upon wings of hope,
to fly another day,
to sail to the golden shore,
and live happy each day.
Reborn to fly on wings of hope,
take flight upon the breath of life.
So close to death,
so close to life,
Live each day.
Reborn upon those wings of hope,
no longer sad and angry.
Staring at a golden sun rise,
Happy from now to ever.
Reborn with wings of hope,
Sorrow can not find me.
Look out at the starlight sky,
the twinkling stars and shining moon,
No more to fall,
no more to hate.
Author notes
This is strang but (at least to me) pretty. please review and tell me what you think, as (since I am the author) I belive that it isn't that good. Thanx much
~Sakura~
A contest entry
- reborn by Misty Sea.
470 points, ended May 13, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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As ever, my favourite piece. I'm so glad I stumbled upon it again, as I do whenever I look at my home page. It lifts my spirits considerably xx -
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I'm so glade that you like Wings of hope that much! It makes me happy to know that it lifts your spirits!
~Shadows~
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Thank you for entering my contest- I liked the write- but it was littered with spelling mistakes (which is a shame)
Best of luck.
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I'm sorry that I had mistakes, the spell check dosn't work that well for me...
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Reborn apon those wings of hope,
no longer sad and angry.
Staring at a golden sun rise,
Happy from now to ever
i love this right here but the whole poem was amazing, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest -
I think it's fanTASTIC!!! I love it, would you mind if I copy it onto my homepage?
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