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Love But a rose

Love but a rose
That smell as sweet as thee
A beautiful flower
In a rain storm shower
Your bright hair
Is light a dandelion there
I love thee
My shadows love thee
Now I feel so compelled
To tell you sweet Ino
You and I are made
For one another

Author notes

Hope ya all like this is for an InoxShikamaru coupling lol

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  • Angel Lunarious gold member
    May 7, 2007
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    very good! i like this one.
    Thx and good luck