Wouldn’t it be nice if there was an information booth on life?
Handing out instructions and telling us where to go
Or the person that would be most suitable for us?
And how great would it be if we knew the future
Mapping out which road we should take and when?
If we did, would we be satisfied?
A contest entry
- ACROSTIC! by A Murderous Lament.
375 points, ended May 8, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I want genious, abstract, something deep. by BigE.
300 points, ended December 6, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice.
I love the fact that you've entered an open-ended poem. I wanted to think and it got me to think! Thank you for sharing a great write. -
Good Question!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The eight wonder of the world!!!!lol....You say alot in these few words and I can see how you got an honorable mention for this. It is short but at the same time thought provoking leaving the reader to wonder if we really would be satified having our life mapped out before us,or would we wonder what might have been if we discounted the map and chose our own way!!!Great point and well taken!!!!Thanks for sharing!!!~~Toni~~
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Thank you Toni.
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AWESOME!
Great acrostic and the flow is so beauitful as well. I also love meaning to this and the cartoon. Altogether it's awesome!
Good luck in the contest and welcome to the finalists.
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it seems some have direction
it seems some have that connection
but yet they are still not satisfied....
if ever they could be
would they be
it seems they would not, as they are always looking for more.. bigger.. better things
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Thank you.
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awe....
thought-provoking indeed!!!!! I really like this and I will probably be thinking about that last question all day....this was really good and I hope you place, best of luck in the contest
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Thank you for reading. Are you aatisfied?
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