Had I the grace to live again
to throw away all I know
and let if fall where it will
as randomly as summer rain
that weeps from fettered clouds
I could wish all day and search
among those weightless clouds up high
where upon angels watch me as I pray
to live again another life
another year, another day
another dream that drifts away
for dreams are made of this
Hope is all I own.
TC
A contest entry
- reborn by Misty Sea.
470 points, ended May 13, 2007, 15 entries
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angelic of harmony words i was impressed with this i hope to read more of your work soon this was very passionate
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Thank you for entering the contest- I like this a lot-I suspect you could have paid a bit more attention to the punctuation- but I won't hold that against the write.
Good luck in the contest!
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Had I the time I would
Thank you for your advice which I hear and believe me I know. It's great that you have the contest for those of us who need to be led.
Regards
Terry
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