I'd give everything i am to you.
I love you more than you could know.
I love to sit by you.
Just to know that your there.
Your my everything.
I'd give you the world if i could.
I love you more than life.
I love to look into your eyes.
Just to know you love me too.
Your my everything.
When i have to say goodbye.
Deep inside i cry.
Even if its just for a hour or so.
I love you.
Don't you ever leave.
A contest entry
- It;s A Love Type Of Thing by paintitblack1001.
300 points, ended June 12, 2007, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Emo Love by HisDarlingDisaster.
330 points, ended June 18, 2007, 31 entries
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Comments
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very sweet and touching, but your repeating line and your title (I assume) "Your my everything" uses the wrong form of "your" (the possessive) instead of "you're" (the contraction for "you are", which is what you mean, I think). Just happens to be one of my pet peeves, so it leaps out at me in this read.
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this is good. Thanks for being in my contest
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this made me cry. this so so sweet and i love it. keep up the great writes and good luck in the contest
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