She was the one who made me happy
The one who was there when i was sad
The one who made me smile
Through the good times and the bad
God took her away from me
I know she's in a better place
But when my time comes
I'll get to see her face
Memories do last forever
With pictures worth 1,000 words
Gifts that will be deeply cherished
And prayers that will be heard
This is my good-bye
To my Aunt, my dear friend
But in time I will realize
This won't be the end
A contest entry
- Prewrite " SPECIAL" by wingsofgold25.
450 points, ended May 17, 2007, 123 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very well done dear, im sorry to hear about your aunt, and this is a wonderful tribute, you did a great job i know how it can be to loose a loved one as i have lost many myself and it never gets easier even with time, but the memories last forever and thats what matter's
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Nice
I think your aunt would love this.
Joe
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Very nice tribute to someone you love. Thank you for entering the contest
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Excellent Poem
I really liked this piece,I think we all have a special person in our lives,who we dearly want to see again when our time comes.You portrayed your Aunt Wonderfully ,and echoed the thoughts I have for my Grandmother.Well done,take care,Moon Shadow.Thanks for your comments.
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aww, i fell the intense passion of this poem. it radiates off the page. i swear
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awww, thank you so much
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Bravo. I love poetry that is set in to devotion to someone close to us in a special way. Great job.
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thanx poetry is my way of expressing my self. i cant really tell people how i feel so i do this instead. ty for your comment
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