My thoughts indulged
My hearts story told
I tried to rewrite
But the endings' still cold
I tried to fix my faery tale
But only got a lie
Now all the characters watch
As slowly I begin to cry
The misery never fades
It lingers all around
The saddness is a stench
Thats seeped into the ground
Never more exposed
Walls come down around me
I try to run and hide
But they stare as if Im all they see
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Thank you for taking the time enter and good luck to you!
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Interesting. I thought the rhyme scheme was interesting, you used simple wording which worked well.
Thanks for entering and best of luck.
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