I hate my appearance
I hate how I think
I hate the way I feel
I hate it when I drink
I hate my thoughts
I hate this pain
I hate the sadness
Its all the same!
I hate the ones who hurt me
I hate the things once said
I hate being so alone
And wishing I was dead
I hate my past
All that I’ve become
I hate my future
My life is done!
Author notes
hmm i was angry with things when i rote it.. what cna i say?
Please tell me what you think
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hey hun, i know we have lost contact over the past few months, well it has been a while now...more than a few months. but after logging back into allpoetry (god it's been ages!) i thought i would just check out how everyone was going...i was a little sad when i realised that you wern't coping too well with life. i know how it feels and i know how 'depression' can make you feel trapped, isolated and disconnected from not only others, but the whole world. i also know that you have wrot many of these poems in the heat of the moment, and it is a great way of expressing your troubbled emotions. another great way is by talking to someone. i know i have not been round for a while, but i hate to see you still suffering, and yes i still do have shit days, but i must say things are a lot better for me. so if you ever need to talk just give me a call or post a msg back on AP. you will not be a burden on me, an i promis i will listen. sorry for not being there. hope to here from you soon.
take care xox
love ness...
p.s you are still a great writer!!
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also can relate to this one too....i seem to hate everthing and everyone, and feel like im the one to blame all the time, and feel like im the one hu needs to b punished! good job on this! u captured the emotion spot on! xx
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Woa well this is quite the write...
my quote is
"love for self runs much deeper then any love"
when you get the chance you can visit my movement
Broken R Hope Society at http://www.myspace.com/brhspower
It's a good thing you got what you was feeling out
Love, Raneika
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fantastic
wow! this is really good the way you've made this flow and the ending is fantastic! it states its point and connects with the reader great work i love it!
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thanks alot for the comment... im happy you liked it. its very true of myself.
take care of urself,
love HB
XoXoXoXoX
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Wow.
Such strong emotion here. I can relate to hating my past. I hate all that I have put people through and all I have done to myself. But one thing that keeps me going even when I am in such a state of self-loathing is that I HAVE THE POWER TO CREATE MY FUTURE.
You should try to remember that too.
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wow i like that!
"I HAVE THE POWER TO CREATE MY FUTURE."
thats now on my msn name, hope u dont mind!
and thanks for the encouragement! i love AP, because wen im feeling my worst, i right, and then everybody gives me such great support and encouragement, and helps me realise there are people around.
i love you and thanks so so much!!
XoXoXoX
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i like this too. you write poems that i can relate to perfectly. and i can very much relate to you very much. i find your poetry very uplifting in a weird sort of way. keep up the writing. you can write very well. stay safe and keep it real.
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thanks alot for your comment.. i am glad my poetry is uplifting.. i dont understand how it can b but ok, lol
take care of yourself
and thanks again
XoXoXoX
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A really sad write
I do hope you get past these feelings of hate and anger and realise that there are now people who do care for you. I hope you can look forward to a brighter future and know we all care for you
Gaylene
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thanks... i think things r looking a little bit up for now. i have my ups and downs, and this was written on a down..
take care
XoXoXoX
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You have every right to hate your past sweetie, and every reason to fight for a different future! This is a healthy way to express your anger and hate, and I'm proud of you Always remember that you mean a lot to me and that I care!
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thanks for being so understanding sis!!!
it means alot, and noing u care helps so much!
thank you!
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All I can say is that I hope you got through this feeling of doubt about yourself and your life. People DO care about you my special AP Daughter Never forget that I love you.
xxxxx
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Thanks AP mum!
and thanks for the comment, appluase, and for caring
love you too
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Never forget that I and so many others here DO care about you and love you xxxxx
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.....wow..... great rite overall..... trust me, i relate to this.....
"I hate my thoughts
I hate this pain
I hate the sadness
Its all the same!"
Great lines..... really portray your feelings well...
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I am sorry that u feel the same, it sucks, but i am glad u liked it
take care
XoXoX
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This is such a sad poem. I think 'its' would read better as 'it's' as in 'it is all the same'. I hope things get better soon.
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Thanks for the comment.. and yes u r totally right i will change that now. i am horrible at spelling and grammer etc. i love spell check
take care
XoXoX
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