I thought I was ready
I thought I was strong
I thought I could do it
But I thought wrong
Can't fine a cure
To heal the pain
Back to old habits
Hurting again
My eyes they sparkle
In this lifeless light
My wounds seem to shimmer
With deaths delight
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well i did it again... i cant seem to stop! ahh i hate myself for it too!!!!!!!
can anyone relate?
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Is cutting a fight anyone has won? I can't stop. I've tried so hard. It's awful.
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I like the real driving rhythm you've got going throughout this, and the strong ending sound of 'delight', it has a certain finality.
The rhyming sounded really in place and not forced, which is one of the things I normally find most disorientating about a piece, so thankyou!
Btw, you might want to change 'fine a cure' to '*find* a cure' if that's what you were trying to say? -
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Thanks alot for your comment. i find alot of my poems have a forced ending because they seem to not end properly for me. but i agree this one wasnt forced.
and im glad u liked the rhyming too
thanks alot for your comment, it means alot.
take care of yourself
xoxoxoxo
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i can relate
i can relate to your poem oh so much i stoped cutting for over a year and then my boyfriend broke up with me and i started it again but now instead if just small cuts i cut hard and deep. everybody tell me not to do it that my pain will some day go away but when you cut people dont realize that it takes away that pain right then and there. people that see cutters most of the time they think phyco's but i would like for once that one of those people live in the shoe's of a cutter and then walk a mile what are they going to say then?
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i completly agree wif you!if one of thos people who judge us, was to wlak in our shoes and understand we're not crazy or weird, we just have a different way of dealing wif our pain!
thanks for your comment too
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*sniffle*
I know how you feel...or used to know!! I don't even hate myself I love you, hunni this was a great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!
x0x0x
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aww..
i am sorry hun. dont be sad
im find now...
im glad u l;iked this poem, i went a while without writting n e thing and letting it build up inside of me so i felt like i needed to let it all out... i am glad i did right tho.
anyways love you heaps hunni
XoXoXoXoX
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*in tears*
this was sooo good!....but wwwhhyyyy??? NOOOOOOO U NEED TO STOP! think of thaT blade as the reason or person who bought you that pain and imagine it screaming at you HAHA! BI*CH! IM WINNING AGAIN!....Dont let it win dont let you problems get you down!.....coz self harming will ease the pain slightly..(i've never done it so i wouldnt know really)..but it wont get rid of the problem or the pain....whenever you feel like self harming....start writing..write about it..imagine ur doing it but DONT! ...anyway another great! poem and i hope what i've said helped you in any way..if not then im sorry i couldnt help and i hope you get rid of your habit,
i guess its true when they say old habits die hard....AWESOME POEM THOO!!!..IT REALLY WAS!
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wow thanks so much for ur comment. i did help and ur so right.
its just hard sometimes... especially wen i no it does help ease the pain. but i will keep what u said in mind it means heaps
much love
XoXoXoX
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Aww sis!
You can do it, I know you can! You have lots of people who believe in you whether it is out in the "real world" or on here, we are here for you always, to listen or talk.
Remember, the only way you can't is if you say you can't.
<3BeautifulDisaster9
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Thanks for the comment! and i no ur totally right.. i CAN do it, but itll just take time, and ALOT of strength!
take care sis
XoXoXoX
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don't worry. i love this piece cuz i feel the same way everytime i cut myself.
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im sorry u feel the same way! but im glad u liked it! talk soon, thanks for the comment and applause!
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You are strong sweetie! And you can do it! It's just going to take time! You'll get there one day chickie, if I could stop, then you can too! I know you have it in you! I love you to bits, and you know you can keep coming to me. That's what friends are for
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aww thanks alot..
thanks for believing in me, that helps
i love you so so much
take care
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Oh no...and I thought you were doing so well 
I'm glad that you can write about it, but I so look forward to the day that you will write to say "YAY, I'VE BEATEN THIS THING" Stay strong my beautiful AP Daughter. I love you and have faith that you will one day beat those demons 
xxxxxx
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i was doing well, and i fell into it again ... but all i can do now is try again! and i will!!!! i cant wait to write that poem either... it will come one day... soon enough.
love you, and thanks so so much
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I certainly look forward to the day you do write that poem. I know it will come soon xxxx
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I relate to this one.....
"Can't fine a cure
To heal the pain
Back to old habits
Hurting again"
Great lines..... overall great poem...
~~~Jenn
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soryr u can relate if u ever needa talk i am right here! ill always try to do my vbest to help!
and i am glad u liked it.
take care of urself
XoXoXoX
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