i write you letters
i slit my wrists
i watch my blood
i see me crack
i hate the pain
i hate sitting here and crying
im tired of missing you
i loved you
i still love you and i alway's will
they took you away
and they cant see
they dont know the pain
they cant imagine loosing the only one you love
i hide my cuts
i wash away my warm blood
i fake happiness
i play a role
i lead a life that isnt there
but i cant anymore
i want you near
but they wont 'cause they dont know
i love you boo
but all i can do,
is try to out do the pain i feel for you
so i cry
i bleed
i slit my wrists
i remember you
and i pretend i feel nothing
i pretend im happy
but im not
i love you boo
but i cant admit it
so i continue a fake life
A contest entry
- CONFESSIONS by XInsanity-FairX.
750 points, ended May 14, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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that is great...i feel for you, so full of emotion
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IT'S AMAZING, i can feel you pain, the kind of pain that is inevetable for us.the kind of love that tears up open from the inside out and eats away slowly. it personifies the common pain we have...love...well done...thanks for entering, good luck
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Words fail me, I feel the sadness. This completely explains how I feel everytime I think how I'll be when my partner leaves me, which right now I feel like its a matter of 'when' and not 'if'. Thanks for sharing,
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thanx.
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