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Love Lost


I once found a piece of paper

lying in a parking lot
obviously dropped by accident
veritably unseen by all
except me.


Yellow in color
ornate, how could it have gone
unnoticed?


My spirit was reminded
of the mistakes of my heart’s
rueful past and
entreated me to pick it up.


The  paper revealed two
hand written words, “My Love,“
and nothing more.


Youthful affection
overwhelmed by
unwonted devotion perhaps?


Whoever wrote this
incomplete letter certainly was
languid in their
love language.


Ecstatic emotions
verbalized on paper, or was it
expressed feelings
reposefully translated?


Knowing what to write is
not as important as
opening your heart and showing
what you feel.







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  • Emmyb gold member
    April 1

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    lovely acrostic piece here. really soothing and gentle. beautiful sentiment. i like your kinder loving poems :


  • forbidden-colour
    August 12, 2007

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    Finalist.
    I thought this was a good poem without even noticing it was an acrostic!
    brilliant piece.

    xxx


  • Talking Toni gold member
    May 20, 2007
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    Great Acroustic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I have tried this many times to no avail!!!!But you are a master with this piece!!!All my poetry rhymes and that is ok, but I'd love to write something beautiful like this and have it make sense. Maybe someday. You have created a masterpiece here and I enjoyed it totally all the way through!!!~~Thanks for sharing this piece!!!~~Toni~~


  • A Murderous Lament
    May 8, 2007

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    This acrostic is truly amazing. I love every line. Even though you ahve shorter lines it flows so amazingly welL! You did a grerat job at this acrostic. Good luck in the contest and WELCOME TO THE FINALISTS!

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33