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Devastaing reality

Sometimes I close my eyes just to
D
  R
      E
        A
            M
To escape from this
N.I.G.H.T.M.A.R.E
That has now become a devastating
R*E*A*L*I*T*Y

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  • Time focus on Me
    July 3, 2007

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    Good

    alsome job with this poem u have done its beautiful job that u have done with this poem u need someone sis I am here for ya always just im, send a message i be here hugs to ya sis once again marvelous


  • Sweet Jane
    June 20, 2007
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    oh

    nice


  • Alyss in Wonderland
    May 7, 2007
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    I like it. =] But it's sad...if you wanna talk, I'm here mom. >( )<

    haha. my virtual hug smiley...

  • torturedsoul9876
    May 7, 2007
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    Good

    I like it