I don’t know how to say this
So I'll give it one good shot
The times that I have known you
Are the best I’ve ever had
You make me smile
You make me laugh
You are there when I need you
Even when you’re so far away
I don’t know how to tell you
So I'll give it another go…
Will you be mine?
Can I be yours?
Forever in your arms
Forever in my heart
The love I have to offer
Is more pure than any gold
I do know how to tell you
Through this poem that I bestow
I have three simple words for you
I Love You
And one simple question…
Will you love me?
By: William Barrett
Author notes
For Skittlez
I hope you like it its been a long time since ive written anything for anyone
A contest entry
- Help Me Get Charlie to Notice Me! by .
1000 points, ended June 23, 2007, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This poem is beautiful, you are extremely talented, keep writing! You did a fantastic job!
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thanks.... i guess.... I'm disappointed i lost to a second grade play on words poem.... but what can i say.... maybe next time.
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wow thatsso adorable! beautiful poem
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thank you
im glad you liked it
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here's to hoping you get charlie to notice you! this little poem should help a little. great going fellow poet. keep up the good work. peace and light, Kendal
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believe me i couldn't get anyone to notice me even if my life depended on it.... though having someone to share affections with would be nice....
im glad you liked the poem, but its for this girls contest and she is trying to get charlie to notice her
-shroomy
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lovely little tale
Love is the magic thing or is it all feelings and
that attraction ..its all a tragedy , but we need it..
I love the approach its innocence and its hope..it spells the word heart ...
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cool thanks ^_^ I'm really glad you like it.... I think this is the most successful poem I've written so far.... I just wish i could write like this more often
-will
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this is nice, i like this you did a great job on this my friend, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Very nicely done! I'm sure this will do well in the contest! All the best!
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thanks for stopping by ^_^ im glad you liked it. thanks for reading.
-will
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:)
How do you describe love? it it that tiny touch accidentally made by your lover as he passes you on to another room? is it the fact that you can feel him before he touches you?Is it that you feel safe in their arms..and know that no matter how bad it gets you will not be alone,and you know with a surety that no one can hurt you.That feeling them in the bed beside you makes you feel so happy and grateful for the little gifts in life.
That you know that the mistakes they make,they didn't purposefully do it to hurt you. They just didn't know. So you tell them it hurt you and they get this look on their face,they cant seem to express it in words and you forgive that because you know that words don't flow as easily for them as it does you.Amazing poem.
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wow love for me.... i felt invincible, like someone cared enough for me to recognize that i am a person in need of affection.... at least till she broke my heart into and infinite amount of pieces.
but it is a real good feeling once you obtain it and know it to be true in both your hearts.
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you should edit the second line>>> So I'LL** Sorry...I'm a grammar nerd. It erks on me to see it left out. And in the third line, time should be times if you are going to use "Are the best..." in the next line....and in the second line of the second stanza...again with the I'LL ** Okay now that I am done being a turd, I loved this. I hope you place in the contest, because this was amazing. Good luck!
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lol thanks, i forgot to add those apostrophes you have been more than helpful and i appreciate that alot.... you are now my new AP sister lol
im glad you like the poem ^_^ it means alot to me.
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this is amazing, i love love love this poem. you are so talented
wow.
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heh thanks, i just wrote it about 20 minutes ago lol. i need some points so im trying to enter a few contests in hopes of winning something lol.
im really glad you like this poem, its the first ive written in over a year .
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