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Ruler

Looking into clear glass
reflecting a dream I seek.
Looking for my true love
hoping for just one peek.

Every maiden is a dreamer
no matter her age or state.
A princess in a castle
preparing for her first date.

On the wall is a small frame,
within which I seek to find.
The prince of a small kingdom,
he's the ruler of my mind.

For the mirror that I look in,
the one to which I refer.
Is not really a magic mirror.
It is just a plain picture.

copywrite 2007
Tamera Dobbins
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  • Ethereal One gold member
    May 7, 2007
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    very creative

    I agree with your assessment in the 2nd stanza:

    "Every maiden is a dreamer
    no matter her age or state.
    A princess in a castle
    preparing for her first date."

    Your rhyme was well done, and I enjoyed the romance of the poem.

    Thank you for entering this contest, and good luck!

    Aurora 2012