Pensive and poetic
hope seems so pathetic
audacious and unsound
from memories Ive been bound
obstinate and dysphoric
feelings often historic
unaided and demented
my own sins repented
rebarative and inebriated
yet always easily infuriated
troubled and unexpressed
by emotions repressed
valiant and deceptive
abused by being receptive
inexplicable and unearthly
living life so unsurely
maltreated and unmarked
due to roads I've embarked
unaccepted and undesirable
all of which are undeniable
A contest entry
- Prewrite " SPECIAL" by wingsofgold25.
450 points, ended May 17, 2007, 123 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TEENAGERS - We're not all thick, yeah? by LaurenLightning--x.
1200 points, ended June 18, 2007, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is amazing.
Beautifuly worded, and the rhyming is fantastic.
I love the way it is in rhyming couplets.
The lines ;
troubled and unexpressed
by emotions repressed
Are my favourite, but I love this whole piece.
Thank you for entering and good luck! :] -
The only thing that I can say is that you have evidently painted a picture of your self as you see your self.
Thank you for the entry to my contest.
good luck.
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