I hope you die! She screamed
Slamming the door
A sigh – We’ll be back after dinner
Hours later
They didn’t see the truck, says the policeman.
Author notes
A different kind of sad.
A contest entry
- 5 Lines of Pure Sadness--2 HOURS ONLY!!!! by Rianna Bear.
450 points, ended May 7, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please don't tell me what you think
Comments
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Well... It made me smile instead >_<


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it was like a mini movie! it's more like a tragic sad! saying words out of anger that aren't really from the heart! thanks so much for your entry!

Rianna


