Candles dance
Life, a maze
Pathway being guided
Warmth Blankets the soul
New Journeys begin
Each day brings hope
Ending peacefully
Never fearing
Tomorrow
Author notes
Background thanks to Maatkara
In a list
A contest entry
- INSPIRATIONAL POETRY! 20 Lines or Less! by Heavens Child.
450 points, ended May 10, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It is great poem
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wow this was amazing oz every word in it was true u really do amaze me
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I love the background on this, it's very pretty. I like the way you've start this piece with beautiful imagery and end in the powerful lines of the poem. Never fearing tomorrow... how life would be different if we all lived like this. Wonderful poem. Thank you for the entry in my contest.
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WEll said and nicely displayed, a tender soft sway within these tender yet deep and powerful lines! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *
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your writes are an inspirational thing to read... always the positives.. well done on this one and good luck in the contest
cheers
Jen
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well that was just beautiful. I def agree with Rihanna....very inspirational and full of hope....just wonderful. Awesome job....keep up the good work and good luck in the contest!
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yup, you're def on the other spectrum, aren't you?
well, this was very inspirational and full of hope!! 
Rianna
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