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Eggshell






when we wrapped ourselves
in joyless sheets, i
searched for that purported
magic, the halo those
fucking apologists
whinny about in their
partner-appreciation manuals

it kept at bay
your face a cliff
and it occurred to me
you were an empty wall
eggshell pale

i almost left a good tip
but couldn’t see my reflection
in your stain-traveled eyes






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Won gold in this contest: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2349482

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  • Abscessed
    May 17, 2007
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    oh beautiful! this deserved the gold. congratulations


  • zillion
    May 10, 2007
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    Partner-appreciation manuals...lol I never tips.


    • -BlackKnight- gold member
      May 10, 2007
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      "lol I never tips." -- Er..what?


      • zillion
        May 11, 2007
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        It was supposed to be, "I never give tips"

        apparently, I never pay attention in grammar class either.


  • lunatick
    May 8, 2007

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    neato, jason ~ I thought you said your recent stuff was crap. normally you're a man of your word, but I have to say, you lied this time.

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