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And she cries

The cuts arien't healing
The scars arien't fading
The blood isn't drying
And I'm still crying

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    May 7, 2007
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    Short but very effective Good Luck in the Contest


  • Naridill
    May 7, 2007

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    You made me think, which was good. I like the simplicity of it, but perhaps too simple?
    THanks and well done.