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crashing down

I have nothing left
my friends are gone
my family disowned me
i've got nowhere to go
nothing to do
no one to talk to
where did everything go wrong?
you used to love me
now you won't look at me
this isn't my life
but it's not a dream
i lock myself in my room
until there's nothing left in me
my world's come crashing down


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  • mattius
    June 10, 2007
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    love it, for some reason i coud read it fluently, who knows myt not only be me


  • Twilight Walker
    May 6, 2007
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    you're not the only.........nice work