A thousand eyes pierce the skies
Searching for long lost stars among them.
As mystic knowledge rains from the heavens,
To quench the gnostic thirst for truth.
The cries of a thousand voices resonate outward
And invoke incantations of ages forgotten.
No longer imprisoned within the archaic
Confines of an existential existance.
No longer bound by the chains of self.
Metaphysical streams flow straight
From the outer reaches of the cosmos,
Flooding perceptions rarely observed.
Straining against the ancient banks
Of the subconscious realm of thought.
A wealth of prehistoric logical progression.
Progressing from the cognitive source.
Moving without motion.
Passing without time.
A contest entry
- Stream Of Consciousness by polly filla.
525 points, ended May 18, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
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Thank you for entering a very thought provoking piece into the contest. Best wishes.
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good write, very thoguht provoking i must say
'Metaphysical streams flow straight
From the outer reaches of the cosmos,
Flooding perceptions rarely observed.
Straining against the ancient banks
Of the subconscious realm of thought.
A wealth of prehistoric logical progression.
Progressing from the cognitive source.
Moving without motion.
Passing without time. '
i love that entire stansa
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lovely wording and flow
"No longer bound by the chains of self.
Metaphysical streams flow straight
From the outer reaches of the cosmos,
Flooding perceptions rarely observed.
Straining against the ancient banks
Of the subconscious realm of thought.
A wealth of prehistoric logical progression."
the above's my fave bits, I love that term Logical Progression. Thanks for entering your stream of conciousness -
Nicely done. I enjoyed the subject matter and your use of language. A few lines really surprised me... A good thought provoking write. Good luck in the contest.
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"existential existance" made me laugh. lol. it's like a descriptive description.
i dont know.
this is different.
i liked it. gave me something to think about.
eo3. miss u.
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