Where did we go wrong?
After all we been through?
Did we console each other for nothing?
Was our friendship worthless?
Have I been so wrong?
What have I done to be ignored?
Yell at me, scream at me,
but ignore me?
Have I not been a friend?
A consoling ear when no one listened?
I want so much for us to understand each other,
but even that seems too much? For us?
Our future stands on a ledge...
Tip too far and we fall...
It takes two to argue...
but it also takes two to make up...
I'm extending the olive branch....
what's your answer?
Author notes
This is about a friend, and I think she knows who I am talking about...
Please tell me what you think
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I understand what your feeling, I've been through that before and I've done that to someone special and you read the poem so you know which person I'm talking about. It's not a good feeling for someone to go through or for the other person being that way. You will work things out with your friend, until then, good luck!
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I See
It is a verry touching Poem though it did seem like you were rambling but that is ok in this poem it gave it a feel of you letting it al out on one breath just to say it all before your courage left you. So who is it now that you feel is just ignoring you? Though I think I know who it is do not give up hope sweet heart never give up hope and always know I am here if you need to talk. Kiss Kiss
DC
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olive branch?
cliche as it may be.... the phrase, it's not you, it's me, comes into play here.
it's funny... these two lines here...
"Yell at me, scream at me,
but ignore me?"
reminds me of when my mother used to get frustrated with me and sit me down. i would just sit and stay quiet... keeping my thoughts in my head, listening, but not responding. that used to upset her so much. she'd rather argue, have SOME sort of response... but i gave her nothing. i guess that's something that's stuck. *shrugs*
it's not intentional. i am sorry.
good write, btw.
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