It is imperative that I see purity in every living being
Each individual follows their own path
Hopefully reaching their higher goal that is universal
When someone is faltering and making wrong decisions
They are surrounded by dark contorting forces
Yet One will eliminate these when the person’s time comes
What remains when the soul is set free is truly them
And is the light that burns within us all
No one is beyond the reach of holy Nirvana
And some are enlightened enough to hold it now
While in this earthly realm we may enter the light
I am one who speaks the truth that sets us free
I have seen corrupting elemental spirits
And have fought and eliminated them
Because I hold the key to the universe
The power that created all intense life
In each person I see a myriad of colourful potential
The seeds that if nourished will spring forth in creativity
I would like to open the inner doors of each one I touch
To perceive the indescribable beauty waiting to be awoken
Through communication and from hearing life’s secrets….
I have received such tenderness and love
From my fellow radiant brothers and sisters
That I can do nothing but radiate love myself
This hour when I behold myself
I see one who has awoken from an entranced sleep
And I now rise transformed into the original me
This moment I am exactly how I desire to be
A contest entry
- Did deep into your honesty and find YOU by Janice M Pickett.
450 points, ended May 14, 2007, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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In this realm of fragmented awareness, of the physical and all correlating to it, man cannot begin to hope to successfully battle the vicious high logic of the dark. He needs help of a higher logic still to which with his limited scope he can only communicate by entirely surrendering - a matter of pure trust. There is a saying: A man who trusts no one, cannot be trusted. Our hope is in a process that begins with trust. Trust in the most extreme high logic of The Light, that in such a form equals infinite and immaculate Love. The Source and Destiny of which you write in the concluding verse who deeply longs to transform us into the original beings in HIS splendid creation, trusts those who have felt HIS touch and gave HIM trust in return. HE bestows them with protection and power to help others recognize that divine touch too. It is what you did in this poem. I commend you for that. Thank you for creating and sharing. Congratulations with the prize, that I consider to be an acknowledgement for the power and truth contained in these words. Take care,
Chris
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within reach...
The light is stirred within you Ms. Light. How can it not be? You are eternally open for the stick to come and swirl your spirit inside. Here's to bliss and following it always...
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heaven
this is a lovely poem and it sums you up perfect.Strong,helpful,kind,thoughtful,and most of all thinking of others.There is only one place you are going and thats upstairs in heaven.I think you have given people the key to help themselves through confidence,and support,best wishes and please keep writing
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A deep piece that is full of the "positive." ... I liked it and at some places it was more poetic than others but it is a pleasent read and I enjoyed. Keep writing-
AtiVan
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A wonderful Revelation
You are very very lucky to have reached a point in your life that most search a lifetime for. This is a poem full of such wisdom. I love it.
Thanks so much for entering it in my contest.
Jan
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