Passion guiding, beauty within shines on the outside
Walls build up from pain inside, scared, and pushing away
Climbing this mountain together in faith, strength arises
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Background thanks to Maatkara
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A contest entry
- Love & Hate by travis34dietC.
300 points, ended May 7, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hey, I have this picture! What a wonderful interp[retation of it you have shown on here as well! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *
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this is a write filled with beautiful imagery for something so short.... well done on this one and i wish you well in your contest...
cheers
Jen
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This was really nice, this can relate to many of us having to go about every day with a smile on our face but inside we are simply dying, it is only our strengh that carries us through. Good luck in the contest.
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I just love how you seem to put such beautiful words into short poems, that say it all. A beautiful write. Good luck in the contest.
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*sighs* Such a beautiful write. I love reading your work, it makes me feel inspired and at peace. I love that you have shown the strength someone can share with you, to climb up in faith and in life in general.
I have someone like that 
Well, Keep the pen flowing and best of luck! Love ya!
A&F
Emily
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i had to read this a couple times to really get this (sorry, i'm a little slow) but this is amazing!! i love how you wrote this! thanks for entering and good luck!!
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This is quite a lovely poem. I enjoyed the word usage as well as the overall optimism the poem represented. I think this poem proves that even brief poems can be profound masterpieces. I also think you made excellent use of the image that the contest host provided. This was a wonderful poem. Best of luck in the contest.
- Andi
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