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King Tut(Clerihew 3)

Oft sad and blue was young King Tut
At a scene that always wrenched his gut
Yes a sinking feeling in his tummy
Whenever he viewed his Mommy's Mummy

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    January 27

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    Thank you for the smile and laugh a wonderful birthday surprise. Best of luck to you and thank you for entering


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    January 26
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    *groans*


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 7
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    oh it is good to laugh


  • sunoir
    January 6
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    that is so cute...


  • RatherImaginative silver member
    May 16, 2008

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    Nice play on words in the last line, particularly considering his own premature fate. There appears to be a small typo in the 2nd line: "wremched" to "wrenched", perhaps? Thanks so much for entering my contest!


  • acari27 gold member
    February 4, 2008

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    Yes again, it felt like a real clerihew, and there was certainly a quirky humour with the mommys mummy


  • azure85 gold member
    May 6, 2007

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    LOL Oh my gosh, you wrote another one! (you can only put one in the contest, tut-tut, how will you decide which one!) This is great, that last line has me laughing so hard today!

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