In golden days long past,
before the birth of you and I,
when the earth was just a rock,
another planet floatin' by.
God was sitting on his throne,
pondering plans of creation.
Eager to put his thoughts
into blissful fruition.
He created the sunny day,
then the dark, starry night.
The oceans, plants and animals!
It was an incredible sight.
And then came the people
that he loved so dear.
Whom he would guard and cherish
and carefully rear.
He created them all
with the help of his son.
Crafting the people,
their lives he spun.
And when he finished the masses,
with precision and care,
there was one person left
who would be precious and rare.
He took an angels spirit,
most beautiful and holy,
bless-ed by god.
He loved so wholly.
He named it beloved,
and showed it the way,
whilst the angels rejoiced
and watched it fly away.
It traveled the galaxy,
the universe so dark!
Leaving stars in awe
as it left its mark.
And after blessing the skies,
it blessed the earth.
Through the spirits beauty
and its wonderful birth!
It took the form of a girl,
on a glorious autumn dawn.
Kissed with the bright warm sun,
God was thrilled with the newborn
Into a woman she grew,
her beauty unsurpassed!
And she blessed everyone
that ever crossed her path.
Nineteen very long years
this tale of a girl spans.
To the present moment
where this golden soul stands.
Reading a message
in a bottle she found.
About a beautiful soul,
heaven sent and heaven
bound.
I love you aimee,
you're beautiful and free!
Your angelic spirit,
brings me such glee!
Today the angels sing,
and god smiles down.
Your birth has blessed
all those around!
Happy birth day.
mat
Author notes
i wrote this for my girlfirend on her birthday and gave it to her on some old style paper curled up in a bottle
Please tell me what you think
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Hey i hope your girlfriend liked this poem! its beautiful and honest
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Oh my goodness; I want a guy like you
How amazing is that that you did that for her, and I hope to God himself she appreciated it; this was such a beautiful, enjoyable, loving, amazing write!
My favourite part had to be;
"He created them all
with the help of his son.
Completing the people,
their lives he spun."
Bravo!
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Sweet
I am not much into religion, but, this, this is
So pure, it hurts.
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Cute
This is such a cute poem, and so romantic. She is a lucky one. (Love the old paper in the bottle idea.) It is such a beautiful poem, and very well written. Thanks for sharing such a personal poem with all of us.
God Bless
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This is really good full of emotion and depth. You sing so much thought into this write. God bless you in all that you do.
Tabitha -
say it with me now:
AWWWWWWWWWWW.
that's the sweetest thing ever. you're my new hero.
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