There is a place I have seen since I’ve known
The man with the hair like jewels, roses and wine
Clear raindrops on windows from clouds are his eyes
It’s the place where the shy vibrant wild violets grow
And they bloom in the sun and bloom over the snow
All carved from gray pearls so perfumed with sea brine
An intricate, delicate, exquisite design
Fills his every footprint with blue petals worth gold
I have followed these footprints along sandy shores
And refreshed my eyes with finding them ‘neath the trees
They have led me to oases, wall words and doors
Each time I come ‘cross them, I’ve seen them before
A sky arc of colors shows sun’s hums to me
And every rainbow step leads my heart to yours
Author notes
Please like this poem ! It is for my Kevin!
A contest entry
- Make it sweet or kinky! by okadadokie.
600 points, ended May 7, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
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Very good
Very good images you've penned. I could see clearly. I enjoyed much. Best wishes in this contest. Dill -
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Nice work, very personal and you brought across the images well. I liked the flow and the imagery it put forth. Thanks for the great read.
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Though the rhyme is inconsistant in the first few lines compared to the others, it still sounds right when read. Your write has a distinctive feeling to it that I like. It's unique and the way you describe your Kevin is truly lovely. Thank you very much for your entry.
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Im not reading your poem because it has not got any of the titles listed. I ask the simplest thing and people cant be bothered to read a small paragraph of what I requested for this contest.
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I really like this. The format is quite different to me, but I seem to like new and interesting things, such as this. Nice work. Luck.
~Oka/KC
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