The beauty of the real,
And the disaster it brings.
All that they feel,
Is the hurtful right.
The emotions are terrifying,
Yet so amazing.
Knowing their wrong in text,
But knowing their place.
Nothing to do next,
But to sit and stare in swirls of aqua.
The beauty of the real.
Please tell me what you think
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I hate republicans too.
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"The beauty of the real,
And the disaster it brings.
All that they feel,
Is the hurtful right."
These are really beautiful lines of this piece.
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I am not certain what your poem implies but the imagery is very vivid and serene to me. Words can heal and kill. The reality is they have a responsibility which everybody is aware. Emotions are like freedom not fear. If you don't feel them and not act on the anyway, you are short of inspiration in creating balance and comfort. An uncomfortable tyranny. Still no idea what you are talking about
Regards.
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magical! really cool writing here. I get several different impressions while reading it...great food for thought here. thanks for sharing, Kendal
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stargirl5
Its so discriptive,it shows and not tells. -
Beautiful
I feel it lacked alot but making a short poem isn't all that easy, therefor it was lovely. Keep up the awesome work ^.^
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