I've always admired you
from the past to the present
I've just looked into your wonderful page
and saw just a glimpse of you
From the looks you are wonderful
and I bet you are an awesome greeter
I just wanted to get to know you more
so please don't leave me here with nothing left
Sometimes I feel the same way
bored and mad as I look through the site
But then I've met only a few people
but they cheer me up and make me super happy
I'm not always happy on this site either
I feel mad when I don't get any comments
Comments are my lifesaver
without them I am dead
So please don't leave this super awesome site
I'll feel very sad if you leave
Please....Don't!!!
Author notes
I really meant this poem!!!!
A contest entry
- Convince Me To Stay or Encourage me to go by Heavenly Angel.
675 points, ended May 21, 2007, 13 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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How kind and uplifting!
You've given our Angel a 'purpose'. That's what it's
all about. Not about contrived conspiracy or someone's
rejection of good intentions.
I like how you spoke it. Sweet and honest!
I'm sure she'll appreciate it.
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Very nice
This was most encouraging. I hope she sees how much she is loved here by all of us! The Shaker
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Thank you for your thoughts; I appreciate you and I appreciate your sharing
I wish you the best in all your writing endeavors
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