Moved beyond the glow, volcanic fires
Gigantic flares exude to this domain,
Sharing what is essentially our desires
Acceptance is white hot, we come again.
For every ounce of force there is recede
The many thrusts of rage that share a time
In coming with each other to concede;
The fact remains, we cool to wait the climb.
It heals the rift between the stubborn split
Of virginal desires that spare the rod,
To bridge perspiring atmospheres that hit
The temperatures that uppermost can prod.
Between the gates of heaven there is. Well!
The saturates to drift betrothal vows;
To overcome the centuries indeed swell,
Where copulations need the great arouse.
The flow of each sensation moves about,
Like nothing on this earth can fully load,
The mound is fully filled, and roustabout
Becomes the baby’s maker, both explode.
As the interceptions feels the tingle move,
Euretha spurts as nature’s aftercare
The slag is more subsidence than a groove,
Indeed it is, to push the land elsewhere.
Author notes
In coming with each other to concede;
The fact remains, we cool to wait the climb.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Dark Poerty by ennovy.
550 points, ended May 20, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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poet
I find your writing to be enlighting and the lines connected by the pen of one who is gifted.
Judy C. Meeker
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i thought there was a lot of emotion and temper in this poem. first, a volcano is known for erupting. this can symbolize a woman's hot temper. this can also, be sexual. i saw the part about the rod and the virginal in the poem and i was confused. then i thought that the poem was about a hot tempered woman, whose bosom was caressed by her lover and then penetrated in the act of sex, because after that is "Where copulations need the great arouse."
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amazing
I was floored when I read the short introduction and had to actually read the whole thing. It had so much emotion and personality. What a great expression. ~ Mikey
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This it terriffic! You gave a personality to the volcano! Very well penned, I'm so glad I know a poet like you, I learn so much.
Love,
Amera
I was going to enter this contest but I looked at the picture and my muse drew a blank. I'm so glad you write this to show me how it's done.
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Unique Thoughts and Views
Thank you for entering my contest, your unique insight on the picture and some great rhyming skills ............novy
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Wonderful write..
I can't as such point out the lines that I liked coz every line is well expressed..
Some words sound a bit complicated and I fail to understand what they actually mean..
But on the whole it's a beautifully written!!
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