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What You Do

I want to be your ray of sunshine
Your spot of fun in a glum, tense day

I want to be your long exhale
or the deep breath that starts a rough day

I want to be your big adventure
In a world of monotony

When you can’t pursue your future
I want to be your one head start

I feel calm to hear your laughter
I could die to see your smile

I love that feeling that your voice brings
When I haven’t heard it for a while

I am so grateful for contentment
In this crazy life of mine

When I’m with you, roads so rocky
Feel as smooth as pudding pie

You make everything that hurts me
Just not hardly worth a dime

You make everything that’s happy
Seem to last a long, long time


All I want is to be yours
And give back what you give me

I just want to be for you
Half of who you are to me

Please tell me what you think

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  • somegirlyouknew
    October 30, 2007
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    i was halfway through this poem, enjoying it, but not truly relating. until i came to the line "i love the feeling that your voice brings..." and i understood exactly what you meant to the fullest extent. i think the great thing about this poem is that theres something in it for each and every person to reminisce about or relate to.


  • Da Hunter
    May 6, 2007
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    Like Holy Wow Girly!!!

    This is a good one, hope I can meet a girl like this one day.