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enjoy until I work on it

I love babies
I love shoulders
I love clothes that could be for the cuddle

A le

recently said angles that aren't a novelty
from dashes of this and that department
versatile textile close
Mamma lala lactation isn't late at all
there's no puddle,
call...

take that cotton down
not to a mope mop,
a baby can know the instructions
oh so easily
itself and not in loitering

Mexican dress named wedding
ah say always
when embroidered
of ordered laced place
yes handled
maternal matrimonal link,
sheets children play under
y's

the room is a poncho,
no nursing quarters shame
wear it like a floppy hat,
with snap finger smile
on-off shoulder style
breast protusions
instantaneously
centrally also
two seconds layered

what and whatever!

that's not polka dot
but scattered cherries
keep studying!

Author notes

use only words, please, poet.

A picture link tomorrow, but for now I'm sleepy with pumpkin seeds -- escapism isn't safe haven

here's a start image May 6th :
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q97/photopoverty/ilovethrowingbuttballgamesssscareee.gif

for fun?http://cgi.ebay.com/VINTAGE-MEXICAN-WEDDING-DRESS-EMBROIDERY-LACE-PINTUCKS_W0QQitemZ290111914309QQihZ019QQcategoryZ48869QQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem#ebayphotohosting

L39 'what and whatever!' takes me to how
Mmy Craving Questions Are Over This One ! =
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q97/photopoverty/DSC03622.jpg

never changing last stanza probably

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    August 4, 2007

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    I find interesting metaphor here...
    clothes and babies to comfortable and familiar.
    Those simple fabrics that lend themselves to so many different aspects of life; this is what your words speak to me. I can see where you intend progress; but the overall theme here is lovely. These lines have caused me to cast an eye to my much-loved quilt of paisley triangles and see messages written all over it. Blue


  • sublimewriter
    May 10, 2007

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    babies are so cute. i liked the part with babies and cuddle, because one cuddles with babies and babies warm one's baby when sleeping on their mothers. babies are like cuddly teddybears

    • PetrifiedAfforded
      May 11, 2007
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      I needed some concentration thanks

      sublimewriter (welcome with well...),

      Thank you for joining me in on this on this on this!

      Babies are thought of as cute and so... don't make it a task to pick them up eh? [Edited: Also I remember a decade back with my treasured snuggly cordoruy over her spine with my fingers going to that there when in it when first worn when I did the dishes.] I'd say more than mutually especially at co-sleeping the mother's breasts are like cuddly teddy bears with heartbeats instead of stuffing!

      11:26 I've got to sing
      my little girl is on her pillow
      and my man is on another
      and I'm in transition
      I've got to sing to catch up
      as my clot that has me gesture second gestation thoughts
      feels better but with energy of so much circulation
      on my mind as well
      I've got to relax not just by laughter
      I can't be later.
      ~Carolyn