Stunningly brilliant, it's part of me
A crimson passion
Deep inside
A part of me I can't hide
It completes me, on it's power I thrive
You console me when times get rough
You let me know that my life is enough
To live, and I have everything to give
How I live for you
Like you are my blood
Running, flowing
Running through my veins
Revitalizing me
Keeping me from being insane
You complete me like a twin
You're also like my foil
That enemy I can't ever win
I love you
But I hate you
I can't live without you
You bring me back when I can't
You give me intestity to the point I rant
You redefine me
And give me strength
For all my life
And for ny given length
....You are my everything...
Author notes
"Pick a color!"
I think it fits, you tell me, please.
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This was sweet. I'm sorry it took me a while to comment it. And i'm sorry we havent talked in forever. How have you been? This was a great write. Keep it Up!!!!
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This is such a good poem! I like this a lot because it's just so cool. The color is like a part of you, you've written so much describing it. I like how the rhythm flows. You have such a nice write! You have a seriously descriptive poem and you've made so many things clear.
Nice!
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Great write!
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Good point
Perhaps a little bit over raged
but you got the point life really knows how to be bitchy
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Wooow you're talented my dear Samanhta! This is one of my favourite poems by you. Yeah. Love it!
Keep writing and God Bless
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its beautiful... and i love your word choice... a very luvly poem! and sorry it took so long for me to get back on here... i kinda forgot my password... haha
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wow...who would have thought that a color could be so much? well you, obviously....I like this because I get the sense that garnet is not the actual object of this poem--but without having it so obvious that the color is lost... "How I live for you
Like you are my blood
Running, flowing
Running through my veins
Revitalizing me
Keeping me from being insane"...very clear image here
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Very nice
Love is a great thing while your in it. I hope your love lasts your whole lifetime. the Shaker
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Hey Dad! Thanks for the comment!
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