As you left you made me cry
I saw my tears fall from the sky
I don't know who I am anymore
Or the animal I have become
You know how I feel though
It's in Aerosmith's song
Baby I don't want to lose you
You are everything to me
I wish it was me you could see
And everything we could be
Everytime I hear songs of us
I start to cry
God can't always take them from these eyes
I prayed that you could be mine
Please God please
Keep him safe...you know how much I love him...
I want to be his hero
I want to be his light
I will do all I can
With all my might
I hear a song
Feeling like I'm a slut
...I'm wishing to numb this pain...
I'm here and you're there
You're in pain, we have to stay strong, this pain I can't bare
Honey you have to believe me, I love you with all of my might
And yes, sweetheart, I pray for you every single night
Please don't do anything to yourself
Give it to God, everything will be alright
[Please, just believe]
I know what I have done was my biggest mistake
I'm at war with myself and what else is there to take
Honey Bear never has a spare second
And caught up with her family, forsakening baby boo?
I feel like no one understand's me, what am I supposed to do?
Bottom of my heart
As I bare the world on my shoulder
Forgive me,
Because I love you
Please
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What do you do when everything falls apart, online realationships doesnt hold, and then confuse love with art. I am so lost and confused, I feel like I have nothing to lose, but I do...I'm scared for him and I said crying out for the last time...
I'm hurting and Internally dying...I'm crying out for the last time
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I loved the opening lines.Makes me want to write something from that.
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Aww... This one is actually pretty good!
A lot of the lines were rather -awfully- cliche, but I can deal with it for now, just cause you've made so much progress.
I did like your obviousness a little this time. When you came out and said "That Aerosmith song." That was a good thing, people wanna know what song, and it makes more sense to them that way.
Liked these two lines:
"I want to be his hero
I want to be his light"
You're getting there, so hang in there!
<3
Allura
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0oh my. I hope that everything is ok. You'll let me know if you need anything, anything at all? I'm always here for you, i hope you know that. and i hope that everything works out for you.
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0oh my. I hope that everything is ok. You'll let me know if you need anything, anything at all? I'm always here for you, i hope you know that. and i hope that everything works out for you.
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God hun...
are you feeling better? Oh this is so sad. You can talk with me, okay? You know that. Please...anything that makes you suffer. Just tell me and I'll try to help. Even though I know I can't...I'll try,ok? About the poem...it's great. Amazing and full of sadness, pain and emotions.
Keep writing and God Bless
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breathe... BREATHE... breathe... you must keep yourself calm and not worry yourself with everything if you want to make it through everything but if you dont have a clear mind when somethin else comes along it will begin to slowly destroy you piece by piece and u DONT want to go through that cuz uve been through WAYYYY enough as it is...all i can say is that if its meant to be God will take care of it and everything else... put your faith COMPLETELY in God and you will be fine! i ♥ you! you know where to find me if ya need!
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Reminded me of Three Days Grace. This was filled with emotion which made it a enjoyable read.
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I love this poem. And I know how you feel... don't worry honey, things always get better. When is just the question. What you do is what your heart tells you. And if that doesn't work, then you know you did all you could. I love the poem... the emotion is expresses is heartfelt. If you ever need to talk, I'm always here! I hope things get better
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thank you so very much. just today, i was in the car,, listening to my Ipod, every song. then i brke one of my long nails...im still breaking down as is...not to mention i was praying...now i have a headache and
idk
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whoa...I hope everything gets better soon
'Cause I'd hate to have to mourn over something I know nothing about. I don't know if my one prayer can change anything, But I can still try, Right? I pray that everything gets beter for everyone very soon.
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