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Perspective

Wings are flapping in the distance,
I look up,
but I cannot see the winged demons flapping,
Closer and closer to me,
I look around,
My black hair lies on my shoulders like silk,
and my fanged teets biting into my lip,
I shout,
as the clouds rumble over me,
The sky is angry,
it wants to fight.
Lighting streaks down,
as it hits my eye,
life isn't so great on the other side.

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  • ennovy silver member
    May 6, 2007
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    Nice well balanced verse

    Thank you for entering my contest,and your unique insight on the picture............novy