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Determination

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Some people never seem to learn

And they give up very soon

They’re the kind of people that . .

Can’t see magic in the moon

 

But others are more resilient

And they never lose God’s trust

Their determination is rock solid

Yes . .For them survival is a must

 

They see the stars . . and far beyond

To a place where dreams come true

They know salvation is a reality . .

And all our prayers are listened to

 

For you never can reach your goal

Without determination in you heart

And survival is hardly likely  . .

If you give up from the start

 

But for those that are unwavering

Determined to go the extra mile . .

They will overcome all adversity

And come out with a smile

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 4, 2007
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    EXCELLENT

    Important lesson to be learned here. Great write.
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  • agazeley gold member
    May 7, 2007
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    Thank you for your prize, but it was not really for the prize that I entered –

    Your contest inspired me to write something that applies to many people that need encouragement to overcome the sometimes enormous challenges that lie before them each day . . I so pleased that you feel that Sean enjoyed and responded to it . .

    Thank you once again –

    Albert.


  • Sandygram
    May 6, 2007

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    Beautiful and Heartfelt

    Hello, Well Congratulations on winning the Silver!!! You have penned a wonderful poem for Sean. Very heartfelt and so uplifting. Just what my friend needs to hear. Thank you for writing this for him. Bless you. Sandy


  • Heavens Child
    May 6, 2007

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    Wow, Albert a beautiful inspirational write. You've got a special gift, the words just seem to flow off the page when you write, you make it look so easy. =]

  • Gogetalife
    May 6, 2007

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    Wow Albert this is wonderful..I thank you so much for entring my contest even you don't know Sean personally and this was just fantastic..the last stanza just say it all..great job my friend
    AJ


  • My Precious
    May 6, 2007
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    Needed to read this today. Thank you.


  • BoMai gold member
    May 6, 2007

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    A good message to spread..

    Agreed, Albert, people should be more determined - not just to survive, but also be happy....then we will see more smile. Enjoyed your write. BoMai

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