My angel came here,
In the smallest of forms.
My angel appeared,
The day Jenna was born.
She has no halo,
Or wings to fly.
She's my daughter you see,
She didn't fall from the sky.
She has big bright blue eyes,
And cute chubby cheeks.
With a million-dollar smile,
That makes my heart weak.
We play silly games,
Like Peek-A-Boo.
And Pat-A-Cake,
And the piggy game too.
She jumps up and down,
When it's time to play.
And I sing her to sleep,
At the end of the day.
She giggles and laughs,
At silly faces and sounds
She cheeses and flirts,
Where there's people around.
She loves bathtime with ducky,
And the bubbles in flight.
She kicks and she splashes,
And she coos in delight.
She gets sick and cranky too,
But I know it soon will pass.
Before too long I will have,
My bouncy baby girl back.
Though she's not all smiles,
Laughter, ribbons and curls,
She is my angel-
And I wouldn't trade her for the world.
Author notes
"ANGEL" I chose option number two.
I wrote this for my baby Jenna...she was born October 26 2006 and she means the world to me.
If you would like to see a picture of her, go to the following link:
http://www.picturetrail.com/gallery/view?p=999&gid=16307174&uid=3289815&members=1
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very sweet, great write
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this is such a tuching poem it truly is it has an amazing flow and it realy tutches me deep bacasue of a baby i know who is 5 months old and verry sick, un fortionetly for him it will never pass, from reading this i think his story will mean alot to you so check out this poem if you like http://allpoetry.com/poem/2965436 its really worth your time aney way thanks for entering and good luck
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doreenh
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aw very sweet poem and yes beuatiful baby as well.
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doreen H
Such a beautiful poem for a beautiful baby. Babies a re so precious. and you sound like a good Mum Good luck in the contest.
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this is a really pretty poem
your baby is cute [i clicked on the link]
beautiful poem. good luck in that contest
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Thank you so much....she's the light of my life, and in my opinion the most beautiful thing on this planet. But what mother doesn't think that about their child?
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I love it!......nothing sweeter than a mother's love...and what a special child,....we share the same birthday, watch out for that scorpio
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haha that's awesome....yeah so I've been told on watching out for scorpios....they're apparently sassy as can be, and Jenna is just the fiestiest little baby I've ever known, and she has a temper out of this world lol....but she's fun.
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This is really beautiful, I have a daughter and I wrote a poem for her but this is just exceptional!!! great job the rhyming is smooth and natural as well.
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What a beautiful poem As a father who has raised three daughters I can recall the joys that they brought into our lives.I now await my first grand child with the same anticipation and excitement as i did 30+ years ago
Poetry that is written from one true feelings always has far more impact on me as a reader Excellent
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