L-Lost and lonely
O-Open wounds
S-Sliced and diced
T-Taking everything away
W-Within my mind
I-I'm all alone
T-Time goes by without
H-Hesitation, within my mind
I-I'm nothing.
M-Make
Y-Your soul
O-Open up
W-With
N-Notes of many
M-Merging
I-Ideas
N-Never to be lost or
D-Die another day
A contest entry
- ACROSTIC! by A Murderous Lament.
375 points, ended May 8, 2007, 18 entries
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coolness
i like the way you used the first letter of each word to make a part of the poem within each line...it's pretty cool...i liked it...keep writeing and i'll check out your others too...keep them interesting! btw don't forget to keep in touch and give a shout out! ;0)
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Wow, this works so well. By the way, I read your author page and figure you sound a bit like me. Where abouts in aus are you? Im from vic.
Sammie xxx -
Awsome I love !! Keep up the good work and feel free to check out my page anytime!! Jess
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WIKID
I've always wanted to do something like this but never could so i congratul8 u
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Good.
I like this acrostic but I think the flow is a bit harsh. I'd like to be able to read this poem and not even know it's an acrostic. Great job though!! Maybe add some words into the lines to increase the flow
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33 -
Forgot them :|
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Woot yay this was good, nice job and good as use of words. I loved it
Lady Madeline
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