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Shadow.

S- Suffocating dark swallows me up
H- Harsh shapes form in the darkest corners
A- Adapting me like them, haunting and silent
D- Dying slowly with no real form the light burns them
O- Over come with pain by the chilling toch
W- Win me over I breathe no more.

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  • A Murderous Lament
    May 8, 2007

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    Awesome.

    I enjoyed this very much. makes me picture the shadow and think of scary things. Great job! Good luck in the contest and welcome to the finalists.

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33


  • LostShadow
    May 5, 2007
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  • LostShadow
    May 5, 2007
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    Very nicely done, great flow.

    Great job.

    Em