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In my window...

I sit by my window waiting for her
Time slowly ticks by, it’s raining now
And all there is for me, is this waiting
This longing to once more speak to her
My angel, my sanctuary, my world

I sit by my window thinking about her
Time slowly ticks by, the sun’s rising
All there is for me, is this memory
Of that beautiful smile of hers
My angel, my savior, my desire

I sit by my window longing for her
Time slowly ticks by, another hour
And all there is for me, are these thoughts
Of what’ll hopefully be our future
My angel, my soul-mate, my reason

I sit by my window waiting for her
Time slowly ticks by, I miss her
And everything that matters,
All I have, am, want and desire
Is her;
My goddess, my angel, my sanctuary - my everything.

Author notes

First thing I've written in almost a year here, figured I'd post it.
Been a while so it's not all that good. But yeah... Enjoy.

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  • Mirrored Symphony
    September 26, 2007

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    Stunning

    I can't stop reading this poem, I keep coming back to it to let its words wash over me.. It always makes me cry because its so beautiful... There is no one favorite part to this.. Its all magical


  • Yummy Cinnamon Bun
    May 5, 2007

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    !!!

    this is pretty, sweety! i haven't heard from you in oh so long how have you been? i really do love this poem. and remember, no matter how long the time periods are that we don't talk i love you Robert.
    erynn


    • Snapshot Dreamer
      May 6, 2007
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      Thank you. Heh, yeah it's been a while. Haha, thanks for taking time reading and commenting.
      I've been... Okay. Had some ups and downs but mainly ups. =)
      Yeah I know, right back at you. You've always been and always will be a dear friend of mine. =)