There is a simple trick to life, based on secret not technique.
Revolving quite continuously around two delicate things;
Giving people what they want,
While knowing what they need.
And distinguishing who you are from who you'd rather be.
Author notes
Once you know what someone wants and you hold their weakness to
If your strong enough to use it, they can't get to you
All power lies in knowledge of what others give that they don't know they have
Don't give people second chances if they are going to hurt you
Name:sleepinginblackrain
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too much talk for my tastes. thank you for your entry though.
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its really cute good luck!
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It's sad to think we live in a world where this is necessary. The only critique I have to say about this piece is I'm pretty sure it should be a semicolon not a full stop at the end of the second line. Thank you for entering
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this is an incredibly powerful piece! I am dumbfounded and have to go back and read it again to grasp the brutally truthful message you have conveyed, so important but so concise. amazing...
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Hm. This really makes you think. I love your last couple lines. Those are definitely lifes secret for sure.
Good Luck!
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hmm sounds like a guideline to livin' life!.
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Very smart. I like it.
Thank you for your entry,
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This is fabulous and so very true. Who doesn't want to give people what they need? It tends to spoil them though and make them become wonton and unappreciative....perhaps balance is in order. Wonderful thought provoking write!
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wow.. great write.. i dont think ive seen a short poem this good in a while...
good luck in the contest..
_krisis
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