Loving you, I give my all,
Only to wonder, do you love me too?
Very often, I look beyond your eyes,
Embrace the strength of your soul,
Melt within your spirit and
Equate living with the tenderness you share.
I yearn, with a burning deep, to touch you,
Nestle within your arms, to be touched by your hands.
Tonight, as we lay side by side,
Hold me tightly and caress all that I allow you to see,
Engage me to trust and to show you more.
Move me beyond mountains,
Obsess my soul to leave crevices in which I hide,
Reign love upon my body and my mind.
Need me as I need you tonight.
I love you more than I can admit,
Need you more than I want to and I’m going to say,
“Go ahead, Love Me In The Morning!”
Author notes
artwork courtesy of Larea Guido
http://lareaguido.deviantart.com/
click on gallery to see more photos from my daughter
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A contest entry
- ACROSTIC! by A Murderous Lament.
375 points, ended May 8, 2007, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Simply love this piece! You have so much love to give, a big heart. When you write like this, it always makes me smile!
Kyle
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AWESOME!
Awesome acrostic. Really flows beautifully. Like you don't even know it's an acrostic. Amazing piece of work! I love the photograph as well! Good luck in the contest and Welcome to the finalists.
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33 -
This is a great acrostic dear poet. The infusion of imagery and emotion flowing across the page here makes for a very powerful piece of poetry. May you continue to let your thoughts flow freely and keep that pen handy!
♥ Touchof1der
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Beautiful, honest write. Super acrostic too.
I yearn, with a burning deep, to touch you,
Nestle within your arms, to be touched by your hands.
So passionate and yet tender. Really nice.
Julie.
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This is very soft, sweet, and tender. I could almost hear it being sung in the background. Good luck in the contest.
Kari -
Delicately written. I enjoyed this very much and I also did not notice it was acrostic until someone else mentioned it.
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I lovethis poem and i completely feel this way about someone right now!!! this is great!!
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I absolutey love it!I can feel the warmth shining through this poem. I wish you the best.
Guin
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I didn't notice that this was an acrostic until I saw that it was in the 'acrostics' contest... a blonde moment for me, lol... Very nicely written, and best of luck in the contest ~ Z
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Nawr this is beautiful, like a dream within a dream. A very beautiful write here.
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You've got the skills.
Very lucky is the man in this write. Good luck in the contest.
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