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without him

anger
pain
cuts
and blades
blackned eyes
darkend rays
depression and stress
go hand in hand
when you decide
to finally do it
you believe it will help
you'll beleive anything
to get away from the pain
cant' you see?
you're nothing without him

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  • Aurora Ceres
    May 5, 2007

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    NO! NO! You are everything without him! This seems to be the theme of poems here lately. Though this is written so well, the content I cannot agree with. Todays younger generation trying to find their self worth in other people...no wonder they all feel so hopeless. We need to find our value on our own....no one else can fill those voids and if it feels like they do...it is only temporary....you cannot expect others to love and respect you if you can't even do it! What would happen if all the men died? Whatever would we girls/women do?! Freakin live! Not roll over and die....so why can't we seem to do that while they are here?!?!?!? Okay, off my soap box now....this, again, is written so very well and cleverly so....best wishes!!