I reach for you
The coolness of your pillow
startling me
I’m so used to your warmth
I miss you
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Very well done. It's short but directly to the point and one can sense the hurt immediately in the poem. Great write.
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Awwwwwwwwwwww yes,
I know the feelings, and there is no one there. sweetly done. loved this.
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aww..so very simple word that touch heart beautifully...thanks for sharing
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wow this is a extremley sad and emotional write.. expressed perfectly in such few words magical and well done you little wordsworth xxx
laura xxxx
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You said it all in these few lines. This is longing. Thanks for sharing.
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Candid
I love the simplicity of this piece...very, very, lovely!
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SO EMOTIONAL
These few words held a volumn of unshed emotions...the since of being alone.to reach~startled~then comes the missing...thank you so much for sharing
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Oh dear! This is sad. In so few words you have spoken volumes. I hope you never have a cold pillow. Well done!
Love,
Amera
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Oh this gave me goosebumps, I feel the aching and longing in this...Exceptional short write! wooohoo! Love the pic!
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