Her tiny, fragile face
Eyes the color of a beautiful ocean
Holding the secrets of the world
Her golden locks
Cascading down her back
So soft and shiny
Her pretty smile
Her soft laugh
The sound of her voice
What could she be hiding?
You would never have guessed
What was happening at home...
The pain she suffered
Those bruses she hid from you
Her smile covering up the lies
Her parents screams
Her fathers blows
Her mothers tsks
Those hateful words
Her hushed cries for help
An empty belly
All because she is the unwanted, the unloved
One doll to play with
Her only true friend
Staying with her through-out the night
It's ragged, tear stained dress
Bare feet
Dirty hands and face
But it's a comfort to her
Through those long, sleepless nights
She has a friend who cares
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Wow.
This is so sad, and yet, I freaking fell in love with it.
So powerful!
~~Gwen
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My tears flow indeed
Oh hoow I wish everyone would go on a child watch for the children for its not just the parents who harm thos children its the friends and the families aunt and uncles that has to know their is wrong done here .
We have to start up neighborhoos groups for child watch and get the ones harming our angels today .
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very vivid and powerful. details that get under the skin.
goodjob.
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Wow......
Wow,
most americans now can relate to this piece, very well.
I can't, thankfully,
how could you have come up with these so vivid details?
This is truly a remarkable piece,
and a joy to read it......
I hope you get good claps,
you really do deserve
these comments and claps,
I don't see one thing wrong wit your piece,
well.................
maybe, if you wanted to, was drag it on, just a little bit more, but that's the only thing i saw.....
This poem almost brought me to tears,
and I'm the person who never cries.......
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This like seriously almost made me cry...
Stuff just doesn't hit me like that
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wow this one is sad but its very good!!!
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i really like this. keep it up
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Thank you, I am still trying to think of what else to add. I have a title. But thank you for the comment and the applause! Very appreciated!
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