Stop asking; I'll scream when I can breathe again.
When I'm not drowning in my own insecurity.
But today, I just don't want to be
Human.
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A contest entry
- Four AMAZING lines by Lj-.
335 points, ended May 6, 2007, 32 entries
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I quite enjoyed this. I like the idea of the occasional escape from the cares of the world.
John -
i'm wondering why you are wanting this person in your mind to quit asking you and what is it and who is it and why are you drowning in your own insecurity and why is this happening to you for and what would make it stop and of course you are human and always will be and nothing can change it untill the day you depart from this earth but for now you just need something in your life to overcome these feelings you are having , i wish you well
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This is really cool. It's different.
Thank you for entering,
Best of luck.



