life is a dream
shimmer
a false remembrance of the past
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fate is a dream
shimmer
the never occuring memory
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Theres only one goal in this life
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to find a meaning
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Only one true path to happiness
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friendship is the key
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finnaly finding that path
shimmer
shimmer
shimmer
the world is rushing away
shimmer
shimmer
shimmer
waking up from this dream
shimmer
shimmer
shimmer
all thats left is truth
shimmer
shimmer
shimmer
the dream fades away
shimmer
shimmer
shimmer
friendship is the only truth
Author notes
shimmer
A contest entry
- Listen........... by poet2angels.
700 points, ended May 9, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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VERY NICE
This one is good too... I like the way you did this... and the tie in with the poem and shimmer... It makes you feel it as well as see it... This is a good one! good luck in the contest! -
sweet
well i must say i am likeing what i am reading great job keep up ur alsome, =)....
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hmph, funny thing your poem is about friendship. its good. not doubt about it. i can see you ARE getting much better. keep it up
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how unique!
Will!
This is beautiful!!!
The shimmer in this , I can see from here!
A great touch....
Beautiful poem!!!
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