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My Brother

In this unreliable world in which we live, it seems as if one of the only constants in my life is our friendship.
The bond between us only grows stronger with each passing year.
Can the memories we've shared even be described?
Watching the stars for hours, talking about our dreams and goals in life.
Laughing until the tears flowed down both our cheeks.
I haven't laughed like that since.
Sharing secrets...you know things that i wouldn't tell anyone else.
Together we've been through arguments, death, and heartbreak.
You've stayed be my side the whole way,
And you know I'll stay be your's - always and forever.
To call you my best friend would only begin to describe what we share.
We have something that reaches so much deeper, that connects us with a bond that's so much stronger than any normal friendship.
The only way to describe what you mean to me would be to call you...
My Brother

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  • x Star Dust x
    August 4, 2007
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    Great word to describe a relationship! I think it was written very well line 5 needs a "t" on the end of "abou" (Your only gramatical error I spotted) It didn't hurt I understood it.

    Thanks for entering my contest you did a great job!


  • Chelsea Void
    June 25, 2007
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    this was so beautiful and very inspirational. i like the raw compassion in this. brilliant!