Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

My Mother's Love

My mom
was like a rose
She was sweet and beautiful
A tender hearted.

My mom was my best friend 
She listen to me
When I have problems
She would smile.

to brighten my day
She was so loving and caring
she reached out
to people who was in need.

My mom's love
was always near
here, there, and everywhere
She loved the Lord.

Each and every day
she and my father
would knelt down
to pray for me and my brother.

She will always be remembered
her memories lingers
she is now the Angel
who looks down from above.

My mom's legacy
was for us all
to keep trusting in God
in all we do.


*We miss you!*
from me, my dad, Lance and his new wife, Lori,
my siblings, and her friends

Author notes

Dedicated To: My adoptive mom, Sandy Lee Reidsma who've died from cancer on February 3, 2004.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 12 of 12

  • fernandafreire
    December 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I could feel the love in this.
    Beautifully written, keep it up the good work
    HAPPY 2009!!
    Fayfreire


  • Kelli Marie
    April 25, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    What a lovely testiment to your mother. This means more than typos, so I won't say anything about that. I could feel the love within.
    Kelli


  • SweetRoses
    April 19, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is very sad and sweet. I personally don't know what I'd do if I was in your place. It must be so hard. I really feel for you. I'm so sorry for your loss.


  • catz Moderators member
    February 1, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This touchs my heart, a beautiful remembrance of your mother and her love for all of you. I know how wonderful it is to still feel her presence and love.

    A poignantly beautiful poem

    Dee


  • michellemybelle gold member
    July 26, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    lovely write and tribute to your Mom
    It sounds like she set a wonderful example of how to be a good Christian woman, mother and wife.
    I can feel your love and how you miss her in this
    I love that your feel her presence, now as an Angel.
    blessings to you,
    Michelle


  • Rose Angel gold member
    May 13, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    Heartfelt and Heartwarming

    This my dear touches my heart for I am an adoptive mother, of a son 28, who is to be married soon, and there have been lots of problems raising him, and with his future bride..Also my girlfriend adopted a girl from Korea and has had heartache..with your permission I am sending your poem to her tonight with mothers day tomorrow...Thanks,my dear for giving us hope, that God works in mysterious ways, His wonders to perform....Thanks for your loving appreciative heart from God you share with us in this poem


  • Katie Lazette
    May 9, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    Beautiful Write

    Candice, this is a beautiful rememberance of your Mother. It is heartfelt. With Mothers Day aproaching it will be a difficut time for you. I will pray for you and your family. Remember your Mom just as you did in your poem. May God richly bless you and give you a big hug.


  • Tabitha-Robin
    May 7, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    This is wonderful and sad. I can feel your pain. It is wonderful that you had such a beautiful mom. Your mother would be proud of you. God bless you dear. Keep your faith in The Cross of Christ and allow God to lead and guide you all of your days. Love you.

    I will be your mom if you wish.

    An AP mother that is, and a mother in Christ Jesus,

    Just let me know.

    In Christ JEsus,

    TAbitha


  • panegyric ink
    May 5, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    now this is what it is all about!!!!

    this is very warm-hearted and touching to my soul Candice! With such engaging descriptions of your Mother, she becomes timeless in all our hearts!!!!!!

    God Bless You Fir That!!!
    brian.

1 - 12 of 12